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Theinformationrevolution,thedevelopmentofmassmediaandtheachievementsinscienceandtechnologyhavedoubtlesslyusheredusinarapidlyprogressingsociety,wherewemayhavenotimetotalkaboutourtraditionalculture.Inthecity,noonecanescapefromthefastpace. Weeatthepopularizedfastfoodandenjoythepopularized"fastfood"culture.Sincewegetsousedtosuchfastthingsthatmanytraditionalthingshavebeenneglected,somepeoplebelievethatthetraditionalculturewillgraduallybelost,butIthinkitwillneverbelost.
Althoughentertainmentsareinabundancenowadays,traditionalculturesstillcontinuetodominate. Westillregardgoingtoaconcertasaluxury.Manyclassicbookstouchastringfromgenerationtogenerationinspiteoftimeandspace. Andwearestillmovedbytheinspirationalspiritsofourgreatancestors.Traditionalfestivalsremindusofourdispositiontothetraditionalculture.Ourreliefintraditionalculturegetsreadytoreviveatanytime.
Tosometraditionalculturesthatareondecline,wehavetakenactivemeasurestoconservethem.Expertshavecomeupwithproperadviceonprotectingsuchcultures.Manyvolunteershavededicatedthemselvestostudyingthem.Firstandforemost,moreandmorepeoplehavediscernedtheimportanceofthetraditionalculture.Therefore,wearesurethatoureffortswillleadtoabrilliantfuture.
Ifaculturewantstogainaneternallife,itshouldchangeitselftocatertothepeopleinitsage.Sodoesourtraditionalculture.Traditionalculturesadheringtomodernmeansappearrigorous.Forexample,wemakeCDsforclassicmusicsothatitcannotonlymeetmodernneedsbutalsospreadfurtherandmoresuccessfullyinthemodernworld.Theappearanceoftraditionalculturechanges,buttheessencewillneverchangeandwillbewellaccepted.
Thereisnoneedtoworryaboutwhetherourtraditionalculturewillbelost.Itisanimportantheritageofthewholehumanrace.Noculture,nomankind.Wecherishthetraditionalcultureaswecherishourbloodinourbody.Thetraditionalcultureliesinlife,forevercontinuing.
简 评
信息厚炸，科技革命，快餐文化……人们身不由己，无暇他顾。这些无疑会引发人们对传统文化的担忧。作者针对这一现象斩钉截铁地提出自己的论点：传统文化不会消亡。然后作者运用了生活中许多为人们所熟知的例子，以及一些良好的排比句式，分段逐层推进，列举、讨论了人们对待传统文化中不同内容的态度和做法，并展望了前景，从而较好地完成了论证的任务。
全文思维活跃，条理井然，可见作者是位细心之人，有一个善于思考的头脑和一颗善感的心。只是在有些语句的表达上还可进行雕琢，以免艰涩难懂。
(点评教师：时丽娜)