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初一期末写作指导
一basicrules(写作规则)
1.信息提取—找全信息2.信息加工–-重组信息（适当的加入细节）
3.列提纲—确定句式，关联词，过渡词，较高级的句型和词汇
方法一:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇
A.Theylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.
B.Theyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.
AIwishyoucanhelpme.
BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.
ATheyarrivedearly.
BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.
AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.
BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.
AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.
BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.
AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.
BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.
方法二:活用多种句型
ASheisveryyoung.
Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.
BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.
CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…
DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…
表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor
2.表示选择:or,either…or
3.表示转折:but,however,althoughhough,afterall,anyway
4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult
5.表示条件:if,unless
6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand
7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth
8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend
9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact
10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort
用恰当的连词，连接下面各句。
HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.
Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.
增加连接词：HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.
美文赏析：Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andto
visitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.
增加谚语后的效果。
Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,―AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.‖Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.
谚语总结：
However,afewpeoplehavetowork.____________________________________________
Asthesayinggoes,“Allworkandnoplaymakes____________________________________________
Jackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.People____________________________________________
whorelaxwellworkwell.____________________________________________
方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于―第二段‖）
Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.
Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.
方法五结尾：提出倡议或号召
Let’s…
Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!
Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.
Don’twait.Joinusnow!
Starttojoinusnow!
Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!
Howamazing!Ican’twait!
Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!
Don’thesitate(犹豫).Itwillbegreatfun!
怎样保护动物的优美语句
1.weshouldn’teatwildanimals.Weshouldkeepthemawayfromourdinner.Inthisway,therewillnotbewildanimalsonsale.Ithinkthehuntersandkillerswillbecomefewerandfewer.
2Weneedtoprotectanimalsbetter.Weshouldgivethemfreshwatertodrink.Weshouldmaketheforestsbiggerforanimalsindangertolivein.Weshouldadvicepeoplenottokillanimalsbeacausetheyareourfriends!
3weshouldprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldstoppeoplefromcuttingtreesdown.Withouttrees,wildanimalswilllosetheirhome.Andwewillloseouranimalfriends.Allofusshouldtryourbesttoprotectanimals.
有关音乐的优美语句
1.Almosteveryoneisfondofmusic.Iamamusiclover.
2.Listeningtomusicisahobbyinmylife.
3.Listeningtomusicwillmakemefeelrelaxed.
4.WheneverIfeelsad,Icanjustturnontheradioandlistentosomemusic.
5.MusiccancheermeupwhenIamsad.
6.feelingsofcountrypeople.Popmusiccanmakeusexcitedandhappy.
7.Iamwillingtosharetheirhappinessandtrouble.8.Musiccomesfromtheheartandflowsintotheheart.
9.Musicisakindoflanguagethatallthepeopleintheworldcanunderstandit